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flynn53
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27. July 2005 @ 18:22 |
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If you are out to describe the truth, leave elegance to the tailor.
-Albert Einstein
My email- Flynn53@hotmail.com
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1. August 2005 @ 01:55 |
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i'm sorry dude, but that site is a bit too spread out, try usin frames. rollover images are nice efx.
5/10
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1. August 2005 @ 02:41 |
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I agree, it is too spread out. I do not mind srolling up or down, but the scrolling left to right has got to go. You can get lost on your home page..... 3 out of 10. First impressions count. Your first impression is not good, sorry.
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slew0408
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2. August 2005 @ 22:47 |
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the link doesnt work
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2. August 2005 @ 23:00 |
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The link doesn' work and wrong form.
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flynn53
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3. August 2005 @ 13:10 |
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If you are out to describe the truth, leave elegance to the tailor.
-Albert Einstein
My email- Flynn53@hotmail.com
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muchu
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3. August 2005 @ 14:30 |
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Can't read the links on left. Blue and Black don't work.
Also, try some proofreading. Here is a sentence pulled from the index page.
"If you think your quallified for teh posision Contact the webmaster with your name , and previos html experiance"
Note numerous spelling errors (qualified, the, previous).
I give it a 2.
HP 502N, 1.3 ghz, 384 MB RAM, HP DVD writer, 120GB WD external hard drive,
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3. August 2005 @ 14:45 |
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Experience, position, qualified.
Oh man! Someone needs how to learn to spell. Most unprofessional me thinks!
Pulsar
The blue text is way too bright for the grey background! It sucks. Too difficult to read. BTW do us a favour & fix the link in your first post!
"If at first you don't succeed, try, try again!!"
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flynn53
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3. August 2005 @ 16:57 |
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oh yewah those were typo's but i foxed them lol
yeah it's pretty crapping but i'm trying man i mean i'm a 14 year old new to html but thanks for the advice
If you are out to describe the truth, leave elegance to the tailor.
-Albert Einstein
My email- Flynn53@hotmail.com
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3. August 2005 @ 20:16 |
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The first impression is MUCH better, You have doubled your score. Now a 6 out of 10. Looks much better.......
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flynn53
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3. August 2005 @ 20:26 |
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Thanks a lot now all i haft to do is find someone that knows something about dreamweaver to help me out lol
If you are out to describe the truth, leave elegance to the tailor.
-Albert Einstein
My email- Flynn53@hotmail.com
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3. August 2005 @ 23:22 |
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Fix the blue text dude. It is WAY too difficult to read. Just 'cos your 14 is no excuse!
You asked us for opinions, & we gave them. At Afterdawn age is not relevant. Some of our most talented members are people your age.
Kinza is a young teenage girl. She knows loads of stuff & contributes LOADS to our wonderful site!
Anyway, that aside I do not know how to make a website, I'm 39, so it shows that I can be a real dumbass sometimes! (P.S I'm not calling you a dumbass, just me!)
Keep up the good work & you WILL get there!
Kind regards,
Pulsar
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4. August 2005 @ 00:59 |
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hey i just re-found this thread, i'm 15 and i made a web page at 14.
follow the C.R.A.P principles
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t e g x
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a i m m
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these are the four things i learnt.
"Its so hard to try to be different..."-Apocalypse Hoboken
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4. August 2005 @ 01:45 |
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OK, give us a clue.....
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flynn53
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4. August 2005 @ 06:55 |
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yeah for once clicked links it's white but for sencond clicked links it goesd back to blue i'm gonna go fix that
If you are out to describe the truth, leave elegance to the tailor.
-Albert Einstein
My email- Flynn53@hotmail.com
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